(this isnt towards anyone im just in one of those moods where id like to try something new : a cynical poem!, let me know what you think)
You beg for something real
I offer reality
in a mixed bag of fun
the grass would be greener
but your ego blocks the sun
Your out of touch
and out of time
I quote 80's songs
because originality
is something you leech
running my patience thin
I hope you realize
that beauty runs farther
than rose makeup and candy lips
I desire just one kiss
but instead I find bitter
you were a muse
whose well ran dry
Just wait
until the image sharpens
and you find
all that you wanted
was right here waiting for you
again not original
but to the point
like the dagger
you once used
or your warm breathe
that so many boys
with their cars and toys
have bathed in
like sweet sin
Maybe once you considered
giving me a chance
I'm not the lottery
one dollar attempts
and loose change collected
Won't earn my intention
from one now infected
vain regards
turn a heart to shards
like glass
you should look in more often
to see who you really are.
far from a once shining star.
Emo songs
and punk ballads
describe you so well
sing along in ignorance
melancholy blisters
and venomous whispers
light you up in shame
play along
to this song
like its all a game
I think to continue
filling up verbs
with malicious intent
are a waste of time
because in the end
my callous friend
your just a fish in the sea
save up that change
maybe you'll win
with that sweet sin
and the grass will start to grow
large ego and all
but in my eyes
those candy lips
and those curvy hips
paint a portrait of bitter shame
I guess you'll ignore me
while I rant and dare to defy
but your just a chance taking girl
and im just the smarter guy.
(wow. I dont think I could write like this all the time haha)
Monday, June 19, 2006
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5 comments:
ummm..."when i'm rome?"
hehe I loved it!
wooosh, you have a bit of a vengeful side dont you? lol not to say the poem is good, but yeah...very bitter and angry! good work
Luisa xoxo
NASTY!
But fabulous! Love it!
Nicely done. :)
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